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Fields of Hope

Fields of hope
were aclick away
after all those glances stolen
after all my hopes had fallen  
something caught
my sight
a light
a beacon
to guide  
through the  
electric window  
i found  
and i follow the scent
of hope like
an
anxious
Hound  
and got
lost like  
a cloud in the skies
in the warmth
of your cholate eyes  
a frienship
was youre request
but i wont give up
on my quest  
to conquer youre heart
making you happy is my form of art  
to protect you
and amuse, im sworn
who would have  
thought
i would be reborn
who would have  
thought
salvation could be seen  
through a computer screen  
AE  
Fields of Hope
a poem about getting a friendship request on facebook from a girl i have a huge crush on whose last name is "Campos" wich in spanish means "Fields" wich give birth to the title thats nothing but wordplay with said last name  
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dime sólo lo que sientes
y si no puedes hacerlo,
entonces, calla para siempre.

Qué hable el viento y la nieve
o la lluvia gris de noviembre,
o la ola cabalgando tu destino
o mis labios en tu frente.

No me digas lo que piensas,
que al hacerlo sólo se miente.
Háblame sin palabras
y con tus ojos relucientes.
1. My body is a cemetery
of all the things I never
had the courage to do.

2. My mouth, a graveyard.
Buried six feet under
are all the words that died
on my tongue before
I could say them.

3. These days, my feet
only know how to go backwards.
My arms are
feeling nostalgic
so I’m taking a trip
down memory lane,
I’m visiting all the ghosts
I have left behind. But
they have nothing new to say.
They’re still haunting
the same stories.
Olvido

Sólo queda el recuerdo
que lentamente se esfuma,
como el calor de estío.

Todo va hacia el invierno
a los campos sin flores
y al profundo olvido.

Olvido y sólo olvido,
un llamado sin voz
y un fuego ya extinto.

Que no deja cenizas,
ni huellas ni sombras,
sólo un tiempo perdido.
AE
Critica Constructiva    

Dime que piensas?
Del poema?
No de mi cara … ¡claro que del poema!        
Oh que bueno porque justo ahora tienes cara de tonto
Muy graciosa. Lee.        

Porque escribiste esto ?    
Lo escribi para ti
Me haces autoevaluarme cuando haces cosas como esta y odio autoevaluarme    
Lo se
No merezco esto sabes…
De que hablas ?    
Soy si acaso la mitad de una mujer, asi que en todo caso me merezco medio poema.
Eso no es cierto, y aun no me has dicho lo que piensas de el ?  
Es tan roto … y complejo … confundido y asustado, como una canción triste, sobre la forma en que sientes la tinta fluir entre tus dedos como si fuera sangre, no tiene un origen real, una buena razón de ser, es la clase de belleza que solo es bella por estar allí. Incluso si esta basado en un suceso real, solo es eso un momento congelado en el tiempo, para ser notado ocasionalmente de la forma en que las velas que arden en lugares sagrados lo son. Es un por siempre pero aun asi … ¿Por qué me estas mirando asi  ?      
Como puedes creer que te mereces solo medio poema?      
Porque asi es, estoy demasiado dañada,rota y desconectada para merecerme uno completo.
Tal vez estes dañada,rota y desconectada pero también los cometas y estrellas fugaces.

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